Hmmmm
It's a good song, I think the bass should have been brought out differently and the melody concentrated on a bit more, like maybe have the melody in piano or something like that.
This is only my opinion though and I think you should keep working on the song a bit because it has a lot of potential.
Good work so far with it.
I agree with the melody part and the bass part, like i said in my Author Comments, i've remixed this now. The melody has been changed and the bass comes in with more buildup so it doesnt creep up so much. If you could be bothered listening to it, that would be great! Thanks for the review mate.
Whoa!
This song is awesome. I love how it doesn't get super boring like most 8-10 minute songs. It's one of the best songs in the top I've heard in quite a while now.
Thanks! structuring is something that require lot of practice!
Awesome!
The transition about halfway through weirded me out a we bit but listening to the whole song justified anything that was wrong with it. I love the melody and how well you made the melody go with the rest of the song, it was totally wicked. +1 song to ipod.
haha yea that reverse kick transition is reeeeally weird, idk why i did that. i guess back then i thought it sounded cool.
Haha! Wicked!
Oh man I have never seen this done before, it's so wicked and original especially since you used your own voice to make the whole song!
glad you liked it ^^
Nicely done
I like how the beat and melody go together. It's beautiful and not too noisy and generally a good tune. however as it progresses I would add something to make it a little more interesting around 1:25, like make it turn into something more emotional like another set of sharper, slightly faster drum beats that add to the melody and first beat to make it more complicated.
STILL:
very awesome
Very nice
I like it, it's very chill and I love the progression + melody, however with that other sound you're using to substitute the bass, I would go back the the natural bass sound. (just my opinion, I think it sounds good as is, just a tip, up to you to decide if it's worth anything) anyways, it's beautiful and also now on my iPod.
I hope I didn´t missunderstood you, do you mean the bass in the intro? well I thought when I change it a bit it would become more interresting. And I thought that it just fits better. But I will try it out when I´m bored, maybe it sounds rly awesome...
Thx for the review and download :3
Sweet! (downloaded)
Very nice, I like how you can make the melody and the beat go together nicely, a lot of people seem to have trouble with that on this site. (although I know virtually nothing about how to make music)
Anywho, It's sweet, can't wait to hear more.
sweet.
This is awesome. but i think paragonx9 is a girl. o-o I could be wrong though.
I love music. That is why I am here, to appreciate all your music, newgrounds!! I am more of an artist, I wish I had the resources and training to be a musician, but all the same, I am here.
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